I admire your bravery and perspective so eloquently written in your meaningful, slice-of-life poem. I like your comparative metaphor regarding L.A. Perhaps this insightful metaphor enhances a future poem, essay or script! I hope you'll choose to share other past and future poems!
Love this! So sorry to hear Louise died, she sounds like an inspiration!
I admire your bravery and perspective so eloquently written in your meaningful, slice-of-life poem. I like your comparative metaphor regarding L.A. Perhaps this insightful metaphor enhances a future poem, essay or script! I hope you'll choose to share other past and future poems!